I need your feedback!!
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Okay, so I have attached an early version of a choice-story-based RPG game. I really wanted to make use of Selavi Games' great background assets, but I didn't really feel that any of the characters that we have in Fuze (currently) fit the same kind of style.
On the left of the picture, you can see my first 10 minute design for a character (this character is not final). On the right, you can see a more detailed design (with eyebrows, nose).
I am not an artist!
My impression, however, is that the character on the right is too "detailed" for the low-quality "design".I do want to know what you guys think, though, because I would like make a character customisation feature, and that wouldn't be very interesting with just shirt colour and hair.
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I like the right hand size a lot more. Also, it’s better than what I would have drawn!
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The right hand one is really good!
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I agree, right hand guy
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@Jongjungbu @SteveZX81 @pianofire thanks guys, I have also improved the mouth; I got a comment that it was out of proportion.
Here's what I have at the moment:
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I think the one in the middle has a slightly odd looking mouth. The other two are a nice style though
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I think the middle guy with the “slightly oddball looking mouth” would be perfect in a 2-frame talking animation.
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I don't know why this came to mind but maybe add nose variations. Longer, shorter, rounder, narrower, fatter : )
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So, how is you RPG coming along, @FuzeBen?
